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Tama, battle! by KorikoRan

I have to say, that i put quite a liking to this picture. You have a good sense of anatomy as far as i can see. I also like her facial ...

Ponyoria's Secret Feat. Sunset Shimmer by xxXSketchBookXxx

This is some nice clean lineart you have here. You made a good use of your colors, even though there are some issues, but i will cover ...

Hachidori by NeMangaWolf

I like the semi realistic approach you made in this picture and you execute it quite well! You make a good use of shadowing and i also ...

MulitiColor Blaze by YETI000
by YETI000

I really like the realistic style you use, especially (her?) eyes. I'm also impressed, by the detail of her hair. The folds in her jack...

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Irmia Salkov by theMuesLee
Irmia Salkov
Her life in the military was destined.
She was born in a familiy full of great warriors with six brothers.
Yeah talk about hard childhood...

She is an skilled swordfighter but would hit an enemy with a gun only if she throws it.
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Mirabelle Almond by theMuesLee
Mirabelle Almond
Raised in the same orphanage as Fenexia, she treats her like her sister (which she is obviously not).
Mirabelle is born blind but has a special ability that makes her see simple shapes of her sorroundings in a somewhat small radius.
She still can't really "see" and also not very far.
Also she can't recognise faces but combat in smal rooms is still possible.

She fights for the same reason as her sister, even though it is a hard life for a children in war, but she is tougher as she looks and can handle it somehow.

Fenexia teases her often by calling her "Owl-Chan" or just "Owl" because of her long nose and big eyes.
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Tama, battle! by KorikoRan
I have to say, that i put quite a liking to this picture.
You have a good sense of anatomy as far as i can see.
I also like her facial expression and the dynamic flow in her hair.
You made a good choice for the color of the outlines, as it makes the whole painting more natural and vibrant.
Overall a very dynamic composition with all that lightning flashing around.

What pulls it down is how extremely sloppy your lineart is!
This is most obvious on the wing... thingies?
Their shape is so unconsistent that it really don't harmonizes with the rest of the drawing.
I can see, that you put much less effort in them than in her actual body.
And when we speak about her body... is her right hand missing?

I could say the same for those rings? and the lightning.
Even though they are supposed to be rings out of light i guess?
You can still give them some kind of shape, make them look like they have actual dimensions because like that they look just like sloppy drawn white circles, because that is what they are.
A ring seen through different perspectives is not allways a perfectly round shape.
A little tilt would make them way more believeable.

You also would agree that this is not what lighning looks like.
First of, lightning is not yellow!
Thats simply stylized.
You can make it like that, but it is not the best way to show real lightning.
And also lightning has kind of a shape.
Look at photos of lightning to see how it behaves and what kind of shape it has.

But as i said before, i like it.
When i compare it to previous of your works its an obvious improvement and that is great!
I hope you will hone your skills further so we can see much more great art from you!
Fenexia Almond by theMuesLee
Fenexia Almond
Raised in an orphanage, she never met her real parents.
Joins the military so that no child should loose their parents in war again.

Too sentimental?
Too much drama?

How's this...

It was a tough job to find a uniform for her.
Not only that she is about 6ft high which makes 184 centimeters of pure womanhood.
The real problem was, that she could not button up any f*cking thing correctly, because no uniform was able to bear a hold of her massive melons!
I mean... this isn't even funny!
Must be one of the reasons she is set behind the front lines...
This and the fact that she can shoot a fly in a heavy storm in the middle of the night, 5 miles away with a pistol that has no scope attached to it.
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Ponyoria's Secret Feat. Sunset Shimmer by xxXSketchBookXxx
This is some nice clean lineart you have here.
You made a good use of your colors, even though there are some issues, but i will cover that later.
Also the illusion of an magazine cover is quite good.

What i noticed first was the huge resolution you use!
A high resolution becomes less relevant, the less details you show, but i see no reason for using a resolution of this caliber.

Also she looks a bit... streched?
If you put her chest, waist and crotch just half a head higher it would make a much more commensurate bodyshape.

I for myself would choose way thinner and shorter eyebrows, to create a more feminine look.

And the most important part...
Do not use grey, black or white tones for highlighting and shadowing!
The outcome will allways seem muddy and unnatural.
Allways use just a darker tone than your main color.
Use the CMYK sliders to create vibrant colors.

Also, do not use the airbrush tool for the forementioned tasks...
It will allways look synthetic, sloppy and like i said before, unnatural.

But i see that you are on a good way and i will look forward to see your improvement!

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tutanvaly Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you for the visit :)
watched!
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TheOneChaos Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ich weiß das du da bist ignorieren ist sinnlos :poke:
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theMuesLee Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bin vor ner halben Stunde nach haus gekommen
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ultimateMuffin Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
alles gute zum geburtstag :ahoy:!
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theMuesLee Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dankerschöwn!
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Anyerina Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Alles, alles liebe zum Geburtstag :heart: :heart: :heart:
Bleib so, wie wir dich alle gern haben, mein stalkeru-sama : D
Und ich hoffe, dass der Rest des Jahres gut für dich verlaufen wird, denn schlechtes hast du nicht verdient :heart:
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theMuesLee Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ich danke dir ganz Eistüten-lich x333 :heart: :heart: :heart:
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hadenamomo Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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Anyerina Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dankeschön du verrückter ;__; :heart:
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theMuesLee Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wein mich nicht an, sont bekom ich auch Pipi inne Augen ;__;

Ich hab das ja auch kostenlos bei mir oben drauf bekommen, das war also nur Eigennütz ok ;____;
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